At some point along the way, most of us have used what are
commonly called "fill-in-the-blank" writing templates. We
might have used them to write a letter, format an essay, or
set-up a resume or CV.
You know what I'm talking about here. It's those form letter
templates that you see in many writing texts and workbooks.
For example, in the case of a letter, a "fill-in-the-blank"
template would look something like this:
Dear [NAME OF RECIPIENT]:
This is to advise you that your probation period in the position [POSITION NAME] expired on [DATE].
The [NAME OF REVIEW COMMITTEE] met on [DATE OF MEETING] and determined that your probationary appointment was successful, and that you should be immediately appointed to [NAME OF POSITION] [NAME OF ORGANIZATIONAL UNIT].
Accordingly, this is to inform you that effective [DATE OF APPOINTMENT] you are officially appointed to the position of [NAME OF POSITION] for an initial period of [NUMBER OF YEARS/MONTHS]. Terms and conditions of your employment are covered by [OFFICIAL CONTRACT NAME/NUMBER].
Would you please report as soon as possible to [NAME OF OFFICIAL], [TITLE OF OFFICIAL] in the [OFFICIAL NAME OF HR GROUP] so that the details of your appointment may be properly documented.
Congratulations [NAME OF APPOINTEE]. All of us at [COMPANY OR ORGANIZATION NAME] look forward to working with you in the future.
Sincerely,
[NAME AND TITLE OF ORIGINATOR]
Although this "fill-in-the-blank" approach can work, it has
a number of shortcomings as follows:
On the other hand, here's what a "real-life" template
would look like for a similar situation:
Dear Jessica:
This is to advise you that your probation period in the position Customer Service Agent (Temporary) expired on November 30, 2001.
The Staffing Review Committee met late last week and determined that your probationary appointment was successful, and that you should therefore be immediately appointed as Customer Service Agent (Ongoing).
Accordingly, this is to inform you that effective December 1, 2001 you are officially appointed to the position of Customer Service Agent in the Customer Support Group for an initial period of 36 months. Terms and conditions of your employment are covered by the Customer Service Group Employment Agreement.
Would you please report as soon as possible to Jim Jackson, Chief of Human Resources, so that the details of your appointment may be properly documented.
Congratulations Jessica! All of us here at MedWay Systems Inc. look forward to continuing to work with you in the future.
Sincerely,
Sharon Smithson Manager, Customer Support Group
Clearly, the "model" that most of us would rather work with, if we had to write a similar letter, is definitely the second one, the "real-life" template.
You can relate to it. It talks about real-life people in a real-life situation that you can identify with. And, you get to see exactly how a professional worded it.
There are other advantages to "real-life" templates.
"Real-life" templates are fully-formatted as final documents so that you can see exactly how they looked when they were sent out in a "real-life" situation. They don't look like some kind of "draft" form letter.
Working with "real-life" templates, it is much easier to adapt them to YOUR actual situations because they give you visual and intellectual cues that you can relate to.
Naturally, when you see how a copywriter or consultant has dealt with a "real-life" scenario, in terms of word choice, context, and punctuation, it is much easier to adapt to the real-life situation that you are writing for. In that way, the actual content has value.
"Real-life" templates are just as easy to work with as other templates. You simply load them into your word processing program and edit and adjust them to fit your own specific situation. Presto! You have a fully formatted real-life letter ready to be printed and sent out in the mail.
You also have the comfort of knowing that what you are sending has already been used successfully in other "real-life" situations.
With real-life templates, it is much easier to find an adaptable "fit" for the situation you are writing for. Not only do they give you the final format of a document, their content provides an excellent real-life sample and gives food-for-thought to assist you in the writing process.
Here are a couple of sample "real-life" letter templates and one "real-life" resume template from my Writing Help Central web site:
Now I ask you, would you rather work from a "fill-in-the-blanks" generic template or, a fully-formatted "real-life" template?
If you are finding this information useful, you can get lots more just like it, plus over 50 downloadable "real-life templates" at: www.instanthomewritingkit.com
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"The templates are excellent and the contents are rich compared to some of the other books on the market. I recently used one of your samples to write a letter of recommendation. The strong point was that your samples are full length; whereas some of the other books on the market use a paragraph as a sample."
--- Bob Fitzpatrick, Westport, CT, U.S.A.
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